Billy Coffey
Billy Coffey

The One (Family Favorites Week, Part II)

April 14, 2009  

I first wrote this for my children, who had grown tired of the usual fare of bedtime stories involving knights and princesses in distress. “Tell us a real story,” they said.

So here it is. Written not just for them, but for you, too. And all I ask in return is that after your bedtime prayers tonight, you think about this and sleep well…

One day God sat upon His heavenly throne and looked down upon all He had made. All the galaxies of all the universes were in His sight. Some were spiral, some flat, some round, but each were wondrous in their size and beauty.
He saw comets whisking about, their tails long and shiny. Suns burst with incredible brilliance. Black holes churned. And He saw the secret places where no eyes but His own ever roamed. Everything turned in a silent celestial dance that many could ponder but only He could understand.

He saw stars of all shapes and sizes—huge red ones, medium yellow ones, small white ones. And around the stars were worlds innumerable. Some hung peacefully in the blackness of space. Others teemed with strange and wondrous life. And God saw that it was all good and wonderful and perfect.

Then the eyes of the Lord settled upon one small galaxy among the millions, then upon one yellow star among the billions, to one pale, blue dot.
Of all the worlds God had created, the blue dot was the most beautiful in His eyes. It was a world of unsurpassed beauty, of churning oceans and majestic mountains, of soaring birds and graceful animals.
But there was something more there. Something far more valuable. For God had made oceans and mountains and creatures on many other worlds and in many other galaxies, but only in this one place, only upon this pale, blue dot, did God fashion beings who carried within them a part of Himself.

Man and Woman, the Lord called them. It was God’s love that gave them life, and it was God’s love that gave them the choice of whether to love Him back. But they chose unwisely. Now, the very ones God had created had forgotten Him. His children had lost their way. And more than that, they had lost their faith.

The pale, blue dot that was once so pure was now nearly ruined. There was war and bloodshed, hate and slavery, pain and suffering. And as the Lord listened, the cries of the people echoed throughout all of heaven. The smile that was upon God’s face began to fade. The cherubim who circled the throne in constant song stopped then, their wings lowered. Slowly they turned to face their Lord, astonished at the sight.
For God, Creator of all, had begun to cry.

Then with a powerful voice He called out, “Michael, come!”

The mighty doors of the throne room opened as Michael the archangel, commander of the armies of heaven, appeared. His clothing shone brighter than the brightest star, and a golden sword hung from his side. As he bowed before the Lord his wings stretched outward, so large and majestic that they seemed to touch the very corners of heaven.

“What is Thy wish, my Lord?” Michael asked.

“Michael,” God answered, “the time has come. Go forth and bring to me the soul unlike all others. Bring to me The One.”

At those words the cherubim again burst into joyful song, for they knew all of heaven had waited for this moment since time itself began. Michael’s smile was lit with the radiance of a hundred suns. “As you wish, my Lord,” he said, drawing his massive sword in salute.

Michael left the presence of God and searched throughout heaven. He walked along the golden streets and by the crystal sea until, finally, he had found whom God had requested, whom God had called The One. The two of them journeyed back to the throne and bowed before the Lord.

“My child,” God said, “do you see the pale, blue dot below you?”

“Yes, Father,” replied The One.

“No world is more precious to Me. And none of the souls I have ever created are more loved by My heart than those whom you see walking upon it. And yet they have forgotten how to live. They have forgotten that they share one Father, and so they quarrel and hate. Their words maim the heart and their actions destroy the soul. They think not of their neighbors, but only of themselves. Yet My love for them is such that I will not forsake them. They have cried out for My help, and I will answer them. I will send them you.

“You must go and take their form. You will grow to walk among them, and you are to help them remember how I would have them live. Teach them to love one another. Show them that they can have joy. And above all, tell them that the life I have given them is not a curse, but a blessing. Their lives upon the pale, blue dot are short and their days are few. Tell them that they must never take their days for granted, but use their time to ease the burdens of others. Tell them not to worry. Tell them not to fear. Tell them that the Lord watches over them, and that His love is great.

“Take care, My child, and be strong. You will be tempted to speak as they speak and live as they live. Resist those things. Remember instead that the pale, blue dot is not your true home. Your true home is here, with Me. Be gentle with others. See in them yourself. See in them Me. Grow in wisdom.
“Let the light I have put in you shine forth and do not forget your purpose, for you will suffer greatly. You will feel the pains of loss, and you will journey to the depths of sadness and despair. These things you must experience, for they are shared by all. Only turn to Me, your Father. I will comfort you in your anguish, I will laugh with you in your joy, and I will bless you abundantly.

“Go now, My child, and make haste, for you are the answer to their prayers. Do not forget Me. Remain strong and courageous, and remember that I look down upon you always.”

With that the precious soul rose up and stood upon the edge of heaven. All the angels gathered there in silence as Michael took The One by the hand and together descended to the tiny, blue dot…

***
How does the story end? I can’t say. I don’t know.

Because, you see, the story is still happening.
Because you are The One.

And right now, this minute, all the angels stand upon the edge of heaven, and watch…
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Comments

  • Amy Deardon

    Wow, this gave me shivers.

  • Beth in NC

    YOU ARE SO TALENTED! You have really got to get your stories out there somehow! I am going to tell all of my friends to check out your blog. So there! :o )

  • sherri

    What a gift, Billy. This is beautiful, and yes, I will think of these words tonight as I lie down.

    The blue dot will never be the same.

    Thank you.

  • Candace Jean July 16

    Time to write a book, Billy. This gave me goosebumps! It will definitely be my bedtime story tonight.

  • Tamela’s Place

    Awe! what a great story! You are a wonderful author your words ring out the voice of God! of course i give God glory but i thank you for being an obedient inspiration of His character! i am going to tell my friends about your blog as well. That was sooo very touching! People need to hear the simplicity of your story which comes from the heart of God! God bless you brother!

  • twofinches

    OK Seriously Billy, as one writer to another, this is an easily adapatable childrens book (think Max Lucado). I love the “pale blue dot” as it gives just the right perspective.

    Blogging is a real discipline and it does serve to sharpen our gift. But it is not all there is…

    You really bless me!

  • LLP

    Truly fantastic… Marvelously done!

    For the sake of proving how awesome it is, I will admit I did cry. lol

    See, when you said you told this to your kids, I thought of my own dad. I don’t recall much of him when I was younger, but from what my mom says, he would carry his kids around the backyard and point out all that God had made. This reminded me of that. Wish I could remember moments like that because now’s he a different person.

    I read this before I went to bed and felt like I was one of your kids sitting there, listening.

    Thank you. You’ve touched my heart. :)

  • Warren Baldwin

    Do you have a book out yet?
    Warren

  • Denise

    You are truly gifted, bless you.

  • Marie

    This is beautiful and should be published.

  • April

    Hi Billy!
    I found you on Beth’s blog…so glad I did! You sure have a way with the written word…I love your style! Your story is incredible!

    Feel free to pop over anytime…hope you have a great day!

  • RCUBEs

    God had given you an amazing talent and may you continue to shine! This is a great reminder for us not to forget the One Who started the work in each of us. God bless you.

  • katdish

    Whoa…didn’t see that one coming! I figured “The One” was somebody else, and that I was going to have to take you to task for some scriptural inaccuracies. But then, BAM! Sorta like the ending of “The Sixth Sense” – it stunned me. Good stuff as always, Billy!

  • lynnrush

    OH yeah! Great post. :-)

  • Sockrma18

    I remember this one!!! I loved it then and I love it now. You are so talented and a true blessing!

  • Amy

    Billy,
    This is an absolutely beautiful story. You are such a gifted writer and story-teller! What a precious treasure and blessing Papa has given you.

    Thank you for re-posting this!

    Blessings,
    ~Amy :)

  • manker

    a g-dincidence to see this today… thanx i needed that :) sounds almost judaic
    shalom

    gp

  • Beth E.

    Awesome, Billy…simply awesome!

    Blessings…
    Beth E.

  • Jennifer

    Ahhhh … a sweet story that I loved the first go-around. Love it still now. Can I say I knew Billy Coffey “way back when?” ;-)

    (Which was actually only, like, 5 months ago, but still … that’s when the Iowa Chapter of the Billy Coffey Fan Club started up.)

    Great stuff. Keep ‘em comin’. And by the way, I do know that what you do, you do for the glory of God. Many have been blessed. …

  • gzusfreek

    Then with a powerful voice He called out, “Michael, come!”

    The mighty doors of the throne room opened as Michael the archangel, commander of the armies of heaven, appeared.

    Here I was breathless. . .

    Because you are The One.

    And right now, this minute, all the angels stand upon the edge of heaven, and watch…

    Here, tears dropped. . .

    I’m pretty hard to move, Billy, a lifetime of walls.

    You have a gift :)

  • LauraLee Shaw

    Goose. Bumps.

    That’s all I’m sayin.

  • Andra M.

    The ending surprised me as well.

    I agree with others; this would make a fantastic children’s book.

  • Warren Baldwin

    Billy,
    I agree with someone’s suggestion here that this story by itself would make a good children’s book. Artwork and illustrations would enhance the work and enlarge it.

    This has the quality of not only being a good children’s book, but the kind of book that even the adults would enjoy reading and looking at.

    I mailed this favorite #2 to my adult class b/c it fits our Wed night study. I know at least some of them are reading it b/c they have commented to me. Good work.

    You are a gifted storyteller.
    wb

  • Tea With Tiffany

    This made me tear up! WOW! I will have to reread it to really take it all in now.

    Excellent sharing of God’s love through imaginary. I’m thankful for your blog and passion here.

  • Joanne Sher

    Oh WOW! I was wondering about your theology there for a minute, thinking you were talking about Christ – but this is SOOOOOO much better. SO glad this was a family favorite – it’s definitely one of mine!

    YES – get it published.

  • L.T. Elliot

    I'm here from Heather's blog. Beautiful story with an ending I didn't see coming at all. What a beautiful message.

  • Heather of the EO

    OH my…

    I can see why you picked this one. I'm so glad you did, since I wasn't 'round here when you posted it.

    Thank you, Billy.
    I really think this post should be a book. With incredible illustrations. Can you see it?

  • This Heavenly Life

    Oh, wow. That was SO good. I'm here from the EO, and I couldn't be happier that I clicked on your link. What a beautiful story, and written so perfectly. I'd like to share this…do you care if I put a link back to you?

  • Dave

    oh wow.

    you just made me :'-)

  • Blessed

    I'm here from Heather of the EO's blog anniversary celebration…

    This is a great story. Thank you for this great reminder that we all are "the one" it's a reminder I desperately needed tonight.